I think both pieces fit the theme well. I find this one particularly striking because I did a very similar in thought sculpture of Jeff and I at your age to the point that the texture of the sculpture and other elements resembled tree bark and vines or branches. It's one of the few sculptures I actually still have from art school. I love the symbolism and flow in your writing. You are very gifted. :)With that said, I am ignoring the fact that this poem and pic could most certainly represent you and Eli. As artists, though, we put everything out there for everyone to see and I respect your willingness to do so.